July 30th, 2009

Mr. Rexroth,

May I call you Kenneth? Perhaps not.
I still call most people older than me by
Mr. or Mrs. or by whichever their
Formal title may be, only because I was
Brought up to respect my elders.

I still do.

A friend of mine introduced me to
Some of your writing now, what feels like
Ages ago. When I was younger
I wanted to write poems that sounded exactly
Like yours, ones that stood the test of time
Ones that would move people like
     When We With Sappho
Still moves the disassembled hearts of
     dead men.

The task of having any writing at all
Stand up on its own merit, I’ve discovered,
Is much harder than I first knew.

I fear there isn’t much room left in this world
For dreamers like me, ones that see past
Pretenses of people. All I wanted was for
A few people, just to listen.

You’ve been gone for far too long and time,
Time only moves in one direction. I grow older by the moment.
Nobody cares anymore about the written word.

But for some reason I come back to Sappho,
All those words of love you wrote ages ago
And I haven’t quite given up.
Not yet, at least.

D.H. Lee

(via Swanksalot)

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3 Responses to “When Us With Sappho”

Seth A Says:

so what Sappho book would you suggest? I don’t think I’ve ever read anything of hers (other than what was written on the side of this truck: http://www.flickr.com/photos/swanksalot/155359222/ )

D.H. Lee Says:

Hey Seth,

You know, to be honest, I don’t know Sappho’s poetry all that well. The only stuff I know is referenced through Rexroth, who I really like (you can see why; I kind of write like him, but watered down a bit).

I suppose I’d just start from the basics. I have a feeling it’s pretty easy material. A lot of her stuff is referenced to the erotic in modern times — and the word lesbian is based off the island she’s from, Lesbos. The word Sapphic is also attributed to that same lesbianism.

The bottom line is that it’s love poetry so if that’s your bag, look it up, otherwise…assume it’s pretty sappy stuff!

Other than that, you and I know about the same amount of info.

AND. Thank you so much for letting me put your photos up. I’m getting a good feel for your style. It was a fluke a few years ago that led me to you.

D.

Seth A Says:

This particular photo did have a poem with it, fwiw. I never could decide if I wanted the text to be *on* the image, or adjacent to it. This one I think I wrapped the words with the photo in the middle.

The part that I didn’t discard (still clumsy but ok)

exhale the history and it a bent branch anyway.
melted, scarred by the fire
We strain the limits of our visions,
try to master the pale rose paintbrush
with our hands all of stone.

Inspiration required breadth

yadda yadda.

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